中考英语满分作文范文 优秀作文的写作技巧
中考马上来临,张承辉博客为考生们整理了一些中考英语满分作文范文,及优秀作文的写作技巧,供大家参考。
中考英语满分作文范文
【作文写作要求】 现在我们周围的环境污染越来越严重。作为一个中学生,我们应节约资源,保护环境,从我们身边的小事做起,做一个“低碳生活”的中学生。
请以“My Low–carbon Life”为题,写一篇作文描述自己的“低碳生活”。
内容包括: 1.地球的污染越来越严重,我们能看到森林被砍伐、水污染和空气污染。 2.你是怎样从身边小事做起,做到“低碳生活”的。如:每天步行上学、离开教室及时关灯和电扇、充分利用纸张、节约用水等。 3.号召更多的人加入到“低碳生活”中来。
作文要求: 1.不能照抄原文;不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。 2.语句连贯,词数80个左右。作文的题目已经给出,不计入总词数。 My Low–carbon Life The environmental pollution is worse and worse today.
【满分作文范文】 My Low-carbon Life The environmental pollution is worse and worse today. Many trees are cut down, and water and air are polluted. As a student I try to have a low-carbon life to save energy and reduce pollution. Firstly, I often walk to school. It can reduce air pollution. Secondly, I always turn off the lights and fans when leaving the classroom. Thirdly, I always make full use of paper and other school things and never waste water. I wish more students to join me and make the earth more and more beautiful.
第二篇: 【作文写作要求】 每当朋友之间即将分手的时候,耳边常常会响起这首歌“朋友啊朋友!你可曾想起了我,如果你正享受幸福,请你忘记我……”。
请你以Friends为题,写一篇90词左右的短文,可以围绕主题适当展开,阐述交友的重要性和好处。
【满分作文范文】 Friends What are friends? We often talk about the topic with others. I think friends are those people who can help you when you are in trouble. Don’t forget the saying, “A friend in need is a friend indeed.” Friends can tell you your mistakes, though what they say is hard for you to listen to. You can share your happiness, trouble and worry with friends. Someone also says, “You can’t walk any step without a friend.” So I think friends are very important to us. I would like to make as many friends as possible.
第三篇: 【写作要求】 近,你们班就“是否应该帮助陌生人”展开了讨论,同学们就这一话题意见不一,你的看法如何?根据所提供的信息,
以“Should We Help Strangers?”为题,写一篇作文。 原因 赞成 帮助他人是美德; 帮助他人就是帮助自己; 反对 怕陷入麻烦; 怕被误解; 你的观点?(至少两点)
要求:1)表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯; 2)必须包括表格中所有的相关信息,并适当发挥; 3)词数:100左右(征文的开头已给出,不计入总词数); 4)不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
参考词汇:美德virtue Should We Help Strangers? Recently our class had a discussion about whether we should help strangers.Different students have different opinions.
【满分作文范文】 Should We Help Strangers? Recently our class had a discussion about whether we should help strangers.Different students have different opinions. Some think we should try to help strangers. Helping others is a virtue,and helping others is helping ourselves.We may come across some trouble and need others’ help some day.If everyone isn’t willing to help us just because we are strangers to them,it’s hard to imagine what our world will be like. However,some are afraid that helping others can sometimes bring us trouble.Sometimes we are just misunderstood and even have to pay the cost of kindness. In my opinion,we should try our best to help others when they are in need of help,but we should also protect ourselves from getting into trouble.If everyone tries a little kindness,our world will be full of love.
优秀作文的写作技巧
第一招:审题细心
学生真正开始写作文前,必须花相当一部分时间做写前阅读、思考等准备,包含以下四方面:
1)审体裁。根据情景提示首先要弄清写何种体裁文章。
2)审结构。明确开始部分、正文部分和结尾部分,定好段落。
3)审格式。如日记、便条、书信、通知的格式等。
4)审内容。弄清什么必需写,哪些略写,尤其是图画式书面表达,要学会连贯性,读懂图的意思。
5)审人称和时态。弄清书面表达要求用何种人称,根据材料确定短文的基本时态。
第二招:衔接流畅
恰当使用逻辑词语,使各要点间连贯,作文通顺。
表并列或递进:and, both…and…,neither…nor, not only…but also…;
表选择: or, either…or;
表转折或让步: but,although, though, however, even though, in spite of, on the contrary;
表对比: like, unlike, while;
表举例: for example, such as, that’s to say;
表强调: in fact, of course, besides;
表时间顺序: when, after, before,as soon as, soon,after;
表因果关系: because, since, as, for, for this reason,as a result;
表结论: in a word, to sum up,in summary, in conclusion, on the whole.
第三招:句式丰富
一篇可读性强的作文,通常能较好体现学生对英语语言结构、词块、句式的运用。因此各类句式的多元呈现往往可以提升书面表达的成绩。
初中阶段英语写作常用的句式如下:There be…;the more…the more…;It’s adj for sb to do something;I think/believe/suppose…(宾从); It can’t be put into realexperiment.(被动)等。
尤其是复合句的适恰运用对提升作文的层次很有帮助。对大多数同学来说,仿写很重要,在教材和很多的阅读书籍中都蕴含着丰富的好词佳句。
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